I haven’t been blogging all that much lately because I’ve been working on my new draft but I did want to add something to the blog that I thought would be helpful to myself and readers of this savage art… Whenever I come across some information in my travels whether it be by my own finding or someone else’s I will encapsulate it into a tip.
I found this helpful tip in Karl Iglesias’ column in this month’s Creative Screenwriting, volume 12,#5. The scope of the column covers how we all strive to create crisp, believable dialogue but can sometimes fall short of this task. In the pursuit of great dialogue one thing must be understood, the character wants something and is having a difficult time getting it. Words need to become action, after all that is what makes an effective screenplay.
Characters negotiate, exploit, coerce, inquire, seduce, irritate, provoke, impress, blackmail, warn or create a power struggle through forceful and confrontational dialogue rather than being sympathetic, aggreeable or conversational. This is what conflict is all about.
And, as we all know, story is about conflict so conflict, in one form of another, must be expressed in your dialogue. One way this can be achieved by having the character ask questions. Questions create a verbal jousting match. It can create a confrontational tone or a coercive one, that’s up to you depending on your characters motivation. Ask yourself what they want and what they are not getting when you start writing a scene and your dialogue will improve and flow greatly.
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